The fire raged for forty days and in forty ways
sparks burned stars on virgin skin.
Beaming heat on nameless faces,
engaged in activities better left unsaid.
Temporary joys felt under shameful satin sheets
Remnants of cigarette smoke linger,
yellow fog lives on the nameless window-panes.
Invisible eyes don’t recognize themselves in a mirror,
with a stranger’s glance staring back.
She believed in new life, but salvation has a price.
She shakes the sky a million times, a cloud labeled hopeless descends.
Hopeless as a Middle-Eastern woman before she is stoned,
a silent movie created to be seen and not heard.
Hopeless as an HIV infected baby,
sentenced to 1,000 winters of deterioration.
Hopeless as a cauldron of broken promises, hovering like death
a subconscious tattooed with past mistakes.
Buried in the bowels of discarded memories,
the bitter after taste of bile remains.
Layers of dust erode emaciated thoughts, covered in an avalanche of regret.
Engulfed in a suffocating silence, a tongue less beast awaits.
Lost in vanilla fields of passion the pen embraces paper,
voices born on the pages of withered skin.
On a weathered spine a cool shudder trickles,
a lost raindrop trying to find its way home.
An empty house with lifeless windows,
a mere shell of what used to be.
This poem was reviewed and edited by Michael Jordan (not his real name but he prefers to remain somewhat anonymous)
Very nice! I am a newborn in this arena called poetry and it is pieces like this that inspire me even more. Thank you.
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Thank you Efrain. We were all newborns are one time or another. And only with continuous writing do we get better. I would love to read some of your work 🙂
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The images in this poem kept me riveted until the end. Very well done. I really liked the analogies you used to describe hopeless.
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Thank you Christie. I appreciate you reading and even more appreciate you taking the time to leave a comment. Comments mean so much(whether positive or negative)they all matter. So again thank you 🙂
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